Moving On  (Editing)

Moving On (Editing)

14.9K Reads 667 Votes 30 Part Story
Curvylady By CurvyLady Completed

Kylie Home is 19 years old her life is nothing good living with a mother and sister that hate her
She expects nothing out of life working in a bar where she gets no respect she does her job and goes home.
She has no friends no life no love and she is resigned to the fact she will never have these.

David Porter one of the new guys in town, a chance encounter with kylie and he can't get her out of his mind.
David and his friends are disgusted with how they see kylie is treated and him and his friends take things into there own hands.                                                      Kylie starts to learn a new way of living bit she is convinced she doesn't deserve to be happy.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               Will Kylie find the happiness she deserves? This book is about having a bad start,  unexpected   friendship,kindness,trying to be happy, love, sticking by you, hope.          #wattys2015

RainbowCupcakezRula_ RainbowCupcakezRula_ Sep 06, 2015
This is good ,but does it change to the male's p.o.v, third p.o.v and the girl's p.o.v? 
                              
                              I am slightly confused....
CurvyLady CurvyLady Jul 06, 2015
I went back through the chapter and corrected the mistakes , I'm happy you liked it :-)
kimmycat19 kimmycat19 Jul 06, 2015
This is a nice chapter, but you have a few mistakes nothing too big, beside that it's good :)
kimmycat19 kimmycat19 Jun 26, 2015
Oh my goodness that poor girl.. I don't think Cinderella even got treated that bad.