My Possessive  Alpha Mate

My Possessive Alpha Mate

173K Reads 5.4K Votes 16 Part Story
miserygirl1246 By miserygirl1246 Completed

Her name is Delilah Madison
His name is Ryder Carson
She's rogue 
He's Alpha
What will happen when she meets this powerful possessive Alpha?

Purplefairy16 Purplefairy16 Feb 28, 2016
This books looked good but you NEED to break up your paragraphs. It would make it easier for readers.
amy_patel amy_patel Feb 22, 2016
Book seems interesting, only thing I would recommend is paragraphs. It's all clumped together it would be easier for your readers if the story was in paragraphs.
SenpaiPeaches SenpaiPeaches Feb 04, 2016
I like the part when Amy says, "Delilah?  Is that you sweaty?"
emontoya53 emontoya53 Oct 12, 2016
How did she survive alone and not go crazy like a lot of lone rogues do,
Lady_Nae Lady_Nae Aug 23, 2016
She ran at 7, but didn't shift until 16. How did she survive by herself at 7? Nothing about the flashback suggests she'd have the skills to
lordfluckington lordfluckington Oct 30, 2016
Why didn't she go to Ted's pack in the first place? I mean I get it if she didn't know, but she could've asked around. I don't know it seems pretty weird to me.