My Possessive  Alpha Mate

My Possessive Alpha Mate

162K Reads 5.1K Votes 16 Part Story
miserygirl1246 By miserygirl1246 Completed

Her name is Delilah Madison
His name is Ryder Carson
She's rogue 
He's Alpha
What will happen when she meets this powerful possessive Alpha?

This books looked good but you NEED to break up your paragraphs. It would make it easier for readers.
amy_patel amy_patel Feb 22
Book seems interesting, only thing I would recommend is paragraphs. It's all clumped together it would be easier for your readers if the story was in paragraphs.
I like the part when Amy says, "Delilah?  Is that you sweaty?"
emontoya53 emontoya53 Oct 12
How did she survive alone and not go crazy like a lot of lone rogues do,
Lady_Nae Lady_Nae Aug 23
She ran at 7, but didn't shift until 16. How did she survive by herself at 7? Nothing about the flashback suggests she'd have the skills to
Why didn't she go to Ted's pack in the first place? I mean I get it if she didn't know, but she could've asked around. I don't know it seems pretty weird to me.