The Baron's Daughter.

The Baron's Daughter.

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Awesome people By Prettylittlestorm Completed

Lies. 
Betrayal.
Loss. 
Innocence. 
Fear. 
Florence never really knew the meaning of these words, truly, until that day when her father got arrested. 
That was the day everything changed. 
Her father, Lord Carrington, was caught raising a rebel army and was taken away to the gallows. Now, she must work for the man that had turned her father in and he seems a little more interested in her than just as a servant.

TwoBeautifulGirls TwoBeautifulGirls Jun 09, 2012
Writing is quite... Modern. Would have been better if there was more historical language.
OurUserNameSucks OurUserNameSucks Aug 02, 2011
that was meant to say great writers not great writer  - __ -
OurUserNameSucks OurUserNameSucks Aug 02, 2011
Can I ask... does it have any romance? Anyways reading this first bit I can tell it'll be good... both of you are great writer... :D. I just spotted some place where you missed punctuation but other than that great! <3
                              
                              ~BeFearless x
feeWrites feeWrites Jul 27, 2011
I love this beginning and you describe things amazingly! I already dislike this Raziel guy...Voting! :)
Prettylittlestorm Prettylittlestorm Jul 03, 2011
@xXwrite2smileXx Haha I know, I never did get my head around them :P 
feeWrites feeWrites Jul 03, 2011
Another nicely written chapter! Though you mixed up TO and TOO again. ;P