house with secrets

house with secrets

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yesenia By yesenia0934 Completed

16 year old savannah just moved into a new house with her step mom. She believes its a nice home. Is it really?

I think you have a couple grammar errors. Not being mean. My story has them too. I gotta get an editor for mine. It's hard being an author, but you are better than I. Keep practicing and one day you may never need an editor at all.
mckennaedrammeh mckennaedrammeh Mar 20, 2015
AWESOME BOOK PAT ON THE BACK YESENUA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAGAGAGHAGAGAGA this is mckenna