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Adaleide in Ozghard, Book 1 of 2 🐇 (Watty Winner, FCRA Winner)

Adaleide in Ozghard, Book 1 of 2 🐇 (Watty Winner, FCRA Winner)

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Cliff Jones Jr. By CliffJonesJr Completed

A little girl falls down a rabbit hole and winds up somewhere over the rainbow. Adaleide's arrival in "the Enduring Land" results in the death of a beloved leader, so she'll have to tread lightly if she wants to make it back home alive.

But Adaleide is not alone on her journey. Inside her head is a mysterious girl known as Ada, her constant companion for as long as she can remember. Ada seems quite at home in this new world and may not want to give it up. As political tensions rise, Ozghard threatens to swallow the girls up for good.

This story is continued in Book 2, also available on Wattpad ( It is a loose retelling of both Alice's Adventures in Wonderland and The Wonderful Wizard of Oz, but heavily influenced by Norse mythology. Similar novels include:
      * The Wee Free Men (Terry Pratchett)
      * The Girl Who Circumnavigated Fairyland in a Ship of Her Own Making (Catherynne M. Valente)
      * The Graveyard Book (Neil Gaiman)
      * Howl's Moving Castle (Diana Wynne Jones)

Length: 39,300 words, 157 pages
      * Watty Winner (2015, "Hidden Gems")
      * Fairytale Retelling Community Award Winner (2016, "Terrific Twists")
      * Featured (June 2015)
      * Wattpad4 Contest Winner (May 2015)
Highest Ranking: #11 in Fantasy (6/22/2016)

CaraMel23 CaraMel23 Feb 05, 2016
Such a great idea to give a quotation caption for each chapter. Putting this book in my reading list @CliffJonesJr. (Speaking of other "Alice" stories, are you familiar with the "Splintered " series, from which I get my avatar image? Looking forward to reading more of your work. :)cara
Kristiekc Kristiekc Nov 21, 2016
Hiya there partner...Love the quotes above, especially the one about the old relatives being the ones to stick you in the looney bin:D
akina0119 akina0119 Apr 13, 2016
Beautiful choice in quotes. I'm so excited to read your work - thanks for sharing!
anupamarc anupamarc Dec 05, 2016
I like the content list in this format, very creative way of building a list without making it sound boring. The quotes are great too. I love the last one.
MichealWoodruff MichealWoodruff Jan 21, 2016
Probably the most interesting Table of Contents I've ever read.
royal888 royal888 Nov 25, 2015
I loved all jule Verne books that I had read. The most amazing and inspiring  author for fantasy and science fiction. Ahhh