16 and pregnant by my brother's Best friend

16 and pregnant by my brother's Best friend

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shantae ferguson By shantaeferguson123 Completed

Payson Patterson moves to new York because her dad died, she's 16 years old and lives with her mother Lorain Tanner and her brother Drake Patterson that's 17 year old, Payson and Drake both attend The Mona high school, except Drake  and his best friend Andrew/ drew is the  most popular senior in school because they both has blond hair, green hazel eyes, 6 packs and the most girls. on the other hand me and my best friend Kellie Adams are the little 16 year old virgins and  juniors known as the popular guys sisters and yeah Kellie's brother is on of the jacks ,Oshane Adams. Kellie has brown hair and dark eyes while i have blond hair and blue eyes , just because our siblings are popular, all the guys are scared to ask us out and no one makes fun of us .BUT THEIR IS JUST ONE TINY ,BIG PROBLEM ,I GOT PREGNANT BY MY BROTHER'S BEST FRIEND. ........



read my story and you'll see how it happened...........

  • comedy
  • drama
  • fanasy
  • romance
  • teenfiction
DoNUTbxtch DoNUTbxtch Sep 23, 2017
So it would be something like. "Sup sis." Drake added, smiling at me. Also, use question marks, exclamation points, periods etc.
DoNUTbxtch DoNUTbxtch Sep 23, 2017
A better format would be putting quotations around the part getting spoken. Also, I dont think anyone prnounces school as skl. Just some advice to better your writing skills. Mine arent perfect either but Im always happy to help😊😊
dezi12345 dezi12345 Dec 25, 2017
Hallelujah some one knows what they are doing cuz the author apparently doesn't . first Chpt and I'm ditching the book. The dialogue needs to be in quotations. SHE SPELT SCHOOL "SKL" WHERE IS THE K IN SCHOOL!!???? "SCHL" NOT "SKL"
Nickiminajsfan Nickiminajsfan Jul 10, 2016
You also watch the secret life of an American teenager ?  It's awesome
Septemberbaby_2003 Septemberbaby_2003 Apr 21, 2016
I love this book it's like a play with all the stage directions
paysonpalmer paysonpalmer May 30, 2015
Omg my name is payson n my best fren aaliyah told me about this book n it is amazing