His Hidden Wife

His Hidden Wife

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Lil_Miss_Imperfect By XMissXNerdX Updated Aug 02

"Do you Alexandra Blu take Raymond Messi has your husband to love and cherish to death do has part". "I do" I said. Little did I know that would bring me pain, heartbrake  and love. 
Alexandra is sold away to billionaire Raymond Messi to help pay off her parents debt. But ends up marrying him has a part of the deal. Ups and down Alexandra gets her heartbroken many times but is in love with Raymond but is
love able to keep them together or is it going to brake them apart......









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novaksangey novaksangey May 11
Ur plot is very nice but it needs space its hard to make out who is speaking
sugarbaby2869 sugarbaby2869 Jun 23, 2016
I won't be falling in love with him at all as for I am concern.
KemNanaCoq KemNanaCoq Nov 06, 2016
Damn nice way to start your story I love it already💖💖💖💖👍
ally5510 ally5510 Apr 17, 2016
Try to make paragraphs or at least the sentence in the same one. It makes it hard to read and sound choppy.
sugarbaby2869 sugarbaby2869 Jun 23, 2016
Alex gorl I know that you are scared,nerves,finds out your angaged to someone that you don't even know and was told by your parents which is sad for something that they had done in their young age.alex I hope that you can forgive your parents for what they are doing to you girl.
Story is great but can you please edit it? Space the paragraphs and put the name of who is speaking at the end of each quotation.