The Neighbors (One Direction)

The Neighbors (One Direction)

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Secret_Writer010 By Secret_Writer010 Updated Sep 12, 2013

A little girl named Grace, age 9, and her father. Her mom couldn't recover from the birth of Grace and died. Her father abuses her because of it, and she can't do anything to stop it. But since she can't, can her neighbors help?? The British/Irish famous boy band, One Direction?? Yes?? No?? Well you would just have to read to find out...

impravidus impravidus Oct 24, 2013
The sad thing that is going to make his horrible for me to read is that there is a nine year old girl name grace that lives down the stret.
Secret_Writer010 Secret_Writer010 Jul 02, 2013
@nixxiiblue0912 Thanks that's really nice! And I'm sorry about that, your Dad, if you ever need a friend just inbox me :)
nixxiiblue0912 nixxiiblue0912 Jul 02, 2013
i finished the first chapter and it is really good. i know how the character feels. my dad was abusive.
Secret_Writer010 Secret_Writer010 Jun 29, 2013
@AudreyWald21 yeah that's a good idea, I kinda forgot that she was supposed to be 6. Thanks I'll change that. Thanks
AudreyWald21 AudreyWald21 Jun 29, 2013
It's good and all, but for a 6 year old she has a very broad vocabulary and thoughts. maybe bring her age up to 9 or maybe make it sound a bit more like a 6 year old. I really like it so far though