The Gangster's Girl (Process of Editing)

The Gangster's Girl (Process of Editing)

353K Reads 6.1K Votes 26 Part Story
Ironically_ By Ironically_ Completed

Cover By ArabelleWinchester

"Please Jack, I'm sorry," I begged him. I knew I  looked like shit while he looked like a Greek god who just woke up.  "I was wrong!" 
"Alana? What happen?" Jack asked. 
"S-she dead," I told him, letting a cry come from my lips. 
"Who?" He asked. I closed my eyes tightly, not wanting to think about it. I heard a motorcycle and gun shots. 
"Jack?" I asked. My eyes widen. 
"Get inside," He demanded grabbing my arms and pulling me into his house. 
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Warning written when I was 13. Going through editing now.

kvngdevxn kvngdevxn Feb 26, 2016
like where you placed the setting!!!wish it was Las Vegas tho...i mean what better place to find gangsters than Sin City!!still like it tho
- - Jan 30
GUYS THIS IS THE FIRST BOOK I EVER READ IN WATTPAD I AM HERE FOR THE NOSTALGIA
CantSleep19 CantSleep19 Nov 24, 2015
Any girl can eat infront of a guy, weather she wants to is the thing :)
ed2wfu ed2wfu Nov 18, 2015
There's so much here. Nice and easy reading. This was great! The pacing was on point.
kimberlyykaye kimberlyykaye Nov 10, 2014
My only problem with Alana is she's a bit judgemental. She doesn't know Jack what he's done or why.
Weirdo_beauty14 Weirdo_beauty14 Oct 20, 2014
miley, zana, tara remind me of miley, oliver, and lilly from Hannah montana