Heavy Metal Lover

10 Part Story 5.6K Reads 146 Votes
vavavoom By vavavoom Updated a year ago
Selena, abandoned when she was 16, has never had life come easy to her. She lives with her best and only friend, Whitney Boulregard, and they both work at Mrs. Lee's Men Lounge, or just another name for a strip club. All her life she's done things she hasn't wanted to, but when something she wants comes her way...she has no idea what to do..
I usually dont read these type of stories, but I like this one, and you have very good grammar, but one thing. In the first sentence when you say "Selena, that guy at the end of the bar looks like her needs another drink" You need to fix 'her' into 'he' then you will be set :D
I usually dont read these type of stories, but I like this one, and you have very good grammar, but one thing. In the first sentence when you say "Selena, that guy at the end of the bar looks like her needs another drink" You need to fix 'her' into 'he' then you will be set :D
I usually dont read these type of stories, but I like this one, and you have very good grammar, but one thing. In the first sentence when you say "Selena, that guy at the end of the bar looks like her needs another drink" You need to fix 'her' into 'he' then you will be set :D
I usually dont read these type of stories, but I like this one, and you have very good grammar, but one thing. In the first sentence when you say "Selena, that guy at the end of the bar looks like her needs another drink" You need to fix 'her' into 'he' then you will be set :D
I usually dont read these type of stories, but I like this one, and you have very good grammar, but one thing. In the first sentence when you say "Selena, that guy at the end of the bar looks like her needs another drink" You need to fix 'her' into 'he' then you will be set :D
I usually dont read these type of stories, but I like this one, and you have very good grammar, but one thing. In the first sentence when you say "Selena, that guy at the end of the bar looks like her needs another drink" You need to fix 'her' into 'he' then you will be set :D