A New Beginning

A New Beginning

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Jasmine Mia Bauer By jasminebauer7 Completed

Percy knelt before three of the gods. His hair was messy and his skin pale. His eyes were red rimmed and puffy and his cheeks tear stained. 
"Percy? What are you doing here so late?" Lady Hera asked. 
"I have a request." Percy said in a croaky voice. 
"Anything for the saviour of Olympus." Lady Hestia replied immediately. 
"I wish to die."

When Annabeth breaks Percy's heart and turns everyone against him, he begs Artemis, Hestia and Hera to kill him. Not wanting their favourite hero to die, they give him a new purpose to live. As the hunts new guardian.

Ok Annabeth's personality is REALLY OOC,yes I understand forbthe sake of this cliche plot but ok come on a bit off the line there.Perhaps you could put percy/annabth in a more plausible break up situation.That beggining really irked me.
Silvermoon669 Silvermoon669 4 days ago
Wait...but Percy's dad Poseidon is basically based on water and those powers are fire...see my point?
BlaiseCroft BlaiseCroft Oct 04
I heard 'bones crack' and I was AAAGH HOW DID U NOT FREAK OUT
plzplz101 plzplz101 Sep 07
How do u get rid of fire though
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              U TURN OFF MY MIXTAPE
                              
                              
                              
                              BRUH
Percy would tell all owls to go away or something. They remind him of Annabeth.
Story needa to slow the oace down a bit give the reader a chance to soak in the info and whats going on.more details would be nice,and more plausible situatioms would be great, some of the situations you made are very 'not compatible' and are some what cringey, but good try.