There's something strange about Sasha, the pieces just don't seem to fit. Kellan's as steady and straight forward as they come, but can he unravel the mystery that is Sasha? Or will it all just fall apart?
wow shes packing?? Cool she seems unstable.... ermm on to the next one?
I think that this is a very good opening chapt as you have given us quite a lot to digest character wise i am interested in seeing where you take this. Off to the next chapt!