Orphan Child

Orphan Child

1K Reads 18 Votes 1 Part Story
Karla By karlasmall Completed

London, England, 1859. A city swarming with the forgotten ones. The ones that nobody cares about, the ones that have been forsaken, the ones that are left to steal or starve. The ones like this little orphan child... After Sally is mysteriously abandoned by her brother, she is left to survive on her own in the dark streets of London. The end of the year is nigh and so is Sally's fate...

jewelsr jewelsr Jul 19, 2015
Starvation isn't really an emotion... More of an act, or a situation.
AnnaSophieShamsili AnnaSophieShamsili Aug 26, 2012
Beautifully written and very touching. Reminds me a bit of H. C Andersen fairytale. Very sad! Keep up the good writing! 
                              Would you mind reading my story "lost"? It would mean a lot to me :)
karlasmall karlasmall Jun 11, 2012
@theentity Thanks for your feedback! Yeah, looking back to when I wrote it four years ago I'd have to agree with you. I guess, as a 14-year-old, I was just trying to impress my English teacher or something haha! Thanks again :)
karlasmall karlasmall Jun 11, 2012
@EllieTyler562 Shame on me for not checking this site lately (Just finished a dire round of exams though!) Thanks for taking the time to read and  comment - it always seems to surprise me when people do!
                              
                              P.S. I love Doctor Who ;)
erimregos erimregos May 23, 2012
This is a very good plot! I think it was a had a bit to complex of a vocabulary for an orphan-child's point of view, considering what we know of Sally's background. Other than that, great concept!
karlasmall karlasmall Jun 23, 2011
@MsAutonomous I'm really glad you liked it. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and for your comment :)  I will!