The Maid

The Maid

11K Reads 678 Votes 9 Part Story
Cassie By CamelotHealer Completed

Rose Gilmartin leaves her home in London behind to work at her uncle's inn on the lonely Yorkshire moors. Homesick at first, she befriends her cousin Bess and young Dominic Monaghan, and meets Bess' lover, highwayman Arthur Langley. But when redcoats turn up in the district, things quickly become dangerous. Can Rose protect her friends? 
Inspired by and loosely based on Alfred Noyes' poem 'The Highwayman'.

Please continue.  Looking great.  Just have confidence in yourself.
Appears to be a very interesting story.  I know you will do very good by it. Please continue on.
fruitcup8 fruitcup8 Jul 22, 2014
Lovely chapter! Although it would be hard to believe that she'd get into a wagon with a random man under any other circumstance, it fits perfectly in this scene!
fruitcup8 fruitcup8 Jul 22, 2014
This looks great! Have confidence and don't worry about little errors here and there! A truly captivating story will make the reader wade through the errors! This is ( even though there really isn't any errors!) does that! Bravo!
cerebral_1 cerebral_1 Jul 07, 2014
Still captivating. I normally don't read first person, but this just rolls along, carrying the reader with it. I love The Highwayman poem myself, so am looking forward to that wrinkle. Okay, now I really have to get writing...
cerebral_1 cerebral_1 Jul 07, 2014
Love it so far. I'm looking forward to really sinking into this. The book cover is beautiful, as is your media and music on the side. I'll be reading more later tonight. Gotta write right now.