Delinquent (Book 1 of The Athens Wolves Series)

Delinquent (Book 1 of The Athens Wolves Series)

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Bonnie Hoffman By WereGirl007 Completed

Reese stood up against her former Alpha and was sent to Werewolf prison until she was 18. Not one Alpha since she had been in there for three years has ever thought about accepting her. Until the day she was getting released.

She has a choice, to go with them and become part of their pack, but it goes down hill when the guards try and tame her for doing nothing wrong.

Or does it?

And what will she find if she does join a new pack instead of becoming a rouge?

She was a Delinquent, a monster, a fighter, and no one, not even a nice Alpha or his family can make her forget about that.

What is her biggest fear? Being so impulsive and aggressive that she scares her new friends and mate off.

~~~~~Exerpt~~~~~


I couldn't believe this. I stalked forward, retching her off of him, and slammed her fragile little body into the closest wall. I kept my growl in check knowing she was human and we didn't need anyone snooping around with questions.

"Reese! Get off of her! Are you crazy?" I heard him say behind me after I kept punching her over and over. I just turned my glare to him.

"You're a monster!" The girl shouted at me and I wanted to both cry and kill her, which made her words true. I am becoming a monster.

"How dare you try and make me feel like this!?" I shouted at him. He came closer to me with a apologetic expression. "Don't!" I shouted in his face pushing him away and then walking back towards my car. I couldn't believe this.

SuckLifeSouls SuckLifeSouls Feb 17, 2016
I apologise in advance if anyone gets mean... But accept is the right form of grammar... I'm sorry 😢😢😢
SarahGen SarahGen Nov 04, 2016
Woah, this is incredible so far! I love the fact that she is just a "little girl" so no one expects such impressive things to come from her! I cannot wait to read more!(:
AprilIbarra9 AprilIbarra9 Aug 05, 2015
I think you should take the "a" in "I was a like brown." Out
AJSCURRAH AJSCURRAH May 26, 2015
Overall, an interesting first chapter! It was a little dialogue heavy, but I like the clear themes and the main character. I shall continue reading
AJSCURRAH AJSCURRAH May 26, 2015
Yo, friendly editing tip - the use of "20 years" here is a little bit jarring, because numerical markers of age, particularly in the double digits, are usually associated with humans. Maybe focus on the wolfs muscle mass or size, when making a deduction about his age? 
                              Hope that helps! :D
AJSCURRAH AJSCURRAH May 26, 2015
Throw some jeans at me, brah, I can't afford to go shopping (blew all my money on schnitzel wraps)