Moments with a Pharaoh

Moments with a Pharaoh

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blackfeather By Blackfeather12 Updated Jul 01

Twenty-five year old Halima Aseem a free spirited archaeologist/ egyptologist, whose only true passion  is to the mummies that rest beneath the sands of Egypt. What happens when she learns that her family is cursed  by an Egyptian in 1881 and believed to be the cause of her half of her relatives untimely demise. What happens while at the valley of kings she enters one of the tombs by chance,belong to Ramses the second ?

You are the first person I know who writes Egyptian. That is AMAZING X
                              Keep going :-)))
I feel an Egyptian music coming. Like in The Mummy and The Scorpion King. Love those moviez!
Woww, ggrreeatt! But I still don't get why Halima wouldn't marry Amir. It they were tthhaatt in love with eachother. I mean she could've married him? Oh and I thought I was in ancient times but it was modern times. Lol. Great story so far *thumbs up* Love the setting.
Lovee the description here!!! It feels like I'm actually in ancient times ^ ^
It was entertainging, you're a very good writer.  But everything went kinda fast and the characters and the story didn't seem...real.  I'm no expert, it's just my opinion.
Your writing is absolutely great! I love how descriptive everything is, it's like I'm there. And the way you opened with this scene is exceptional. And I already feel this way and I haven't even finished the chapter.