What happens when Mikey's brother
Find out what there teasing done to there brothers selva steam can they help Mikey before he makes a very big mistake?
Aaaaaaaaaaaaw, don't think that way lovely, adorable, wonderful and freckled cutie!
Wow XD Raph and Leo was really OOC here....
Raph was talking like a teenage girl XD
Good plot and stuff but you should get a editor to help with the spelling and grammer
And to kinda well pace the story.....
Other then that its ok....
No!no!no!no!no! Come here "hugs mikey " no more crying child 😌
I love this chapter and the story soo far... But please no be offended but you have a lot of grammatical errors and ypu tend to use "!?" To much on this part. I'm just sayin to make you improve. Honestly I was just like you on my first fanfic :P so yea...! Love ur story btw! :)
raph u r be turtle , but u took it to far,if this boy starts cutting you'll never see the light of day, Mikey stay strong were here for u, just break the forth wall , if u won't I will ,( breaks forth wall and hugs Mikey)