What happens when Mikey's brother
Find out what there teasing done to there brothers selva steam can they help Mikey before he makes a very big mistake?
Good plot and stuff but you should get a editor to help with the spelling and grammer
And to kinda well pace the story.....
Other then that its ok....
I knew something like this would happen.You treat him bad and he changes
fix your grammar. and 'wall' is while btw. i can correct all of them if you want me to.
Me: *slaps Raph and Leo*
Raph: Hey!! *goes to hit back*
Leo: *rubs head*
Me: *does the neck pinching things Splinters does*
Raph: *falls on floor*
Me: *Knocks out with Don's staff*
Raph: *lies on floor unconscious*
Don: *knows better to say anything*
Leo: *looks slightly scared*
Is it bad I laughed at the part where he was "dancing his little heart out?" lol
Although the spelling is weird, I LOVE THIS STORY ITS AWESOME