Dark Secret (this story does have a serous moral and plot to it that will be talked about at the end)

Dark Secret (this story does have a serous moral and plot to it that will be talked about at the end)

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sweetstylelove By sweetstylelove Completed

What happens when Mikey's brother
Find out what there teasing done to there brothers selva steam can they help Mikey before he makes a very big mistake?

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You spelled Kraang wrong. (Please don't think of this as a rude comment I'm just trying to help you out.)
littlemissmarvel02 littlemissmarvel02 Jul 21, 2016
Good plot and stuff but you should get a editor to help with the spelling and grammer
                              And to kinda well pace the story.....
                              Other then that its ok....
Tresk2468 Tresk2468 Dec 29, 2016
I knew something like this would happen.You treat him bad and he changes
HarambeBreathes HarambeBreathes Dec 31, 2016
fix your grammar. and 'wall' is while btw. i can correct all of them if you want me to.
Donatellosgirl0110 Donatellosgirl0110 Oct 10, 2015
Me: *slaps Raph and Leo*
                              
                              Raph: Hey!! *goes to hit back*
                              
                              Leo: *rubs head*
                              
                              Me: *does the neck pinching things Splinters does*
                              
                              Raph: *falls on floor*
                              
                              Me: *Knocks out with Don's staff*
                              
                              Raph: *lies on floor unconscious*
                              
                              Don: *knows better to say anything*
                              
                              Leo: *looks slightly scared*
Zoethezany Zoethezany May 03, 2015
Is it bad I laughed at the part where he was "dancing his little heart out?" lol