Dark Secret (this story does have a serous moral and plot to it that will be talked about at the end)

Dark Secret (this story does have a serous moral and plot to it that will be talked about at the end)

25.1K Reads 799 Votes 11 Part Story
sweetstylelove By sweetstylelove Completed

What happens when Mikey's brother
Find out what there teasing done to there brothers selva steam can they help Mikey before he makes a very big mistake?

Aaaaaaaaaaaaw, don't think that way lovely, adorable, wonderful and freckled cutie!
Wow XD Raph and Leo was really OOC here....
                              Raph was talking like a teenage girl XD
Good plot and stuff but you should get a editor to help with the spelling and grammer
                              And to kinda well pace the story.....
                              Other then that its ok....
pinkca25 pinkca25 May 25
No!no!no!no!no! Come here "hugs mikey " no more crying child 😌
JoFreak JoFreak Jan 16
I love this chapter and the story soo far... But please no be offended but you have a lot of grammatical errors and ypu tend to use "!?" To much on this part. I'm just sayin to make you improve. Honestly I was just like you on my first fanfic :P so yea...! Love ur story btw! :)
- - Jan 03
raph u r be turtle , but u took it to far,if this boy starts cutting you'll never see the light of day, Mikey stay strong were here for u, just break the forth wall , if u won't I will ,( breaks forth wall and hugs Mikey)