Elliza's Inevitable Dream's

Elliza's Inevitable Dream's

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Amanda By BelieveInMe Updated Nov 07, 2010

Allie Caden has never been normal.  This, she has learned to cope with over the years.  
Only until recently, though, when she was startled awoken by something that had changed her life in a monumental way in just seconds.  Now, she has been repeatedly getting the same dream over and over again, along with others.  She has been keeping this a well known secret from the human world for as long as she has known, but this time around, she realizes that she must tell someone.  Tell someone she truly loves and cares about.  This person, however, may end up being the cause of her own death.  
Will she eventually tell him, trying to change what she knows is inevitable; or let things play out the way she’s seen it so many times?

stillhere stillhere Sep 05, 2010
This is really good you have a really promising talent. Theres a few run-on sentences, and maybe a few more commas than necessary. Other than that,  like it.
Imagine0139 Imagine0139 Aug 11, 2010
WOW. It's really great so far!! :D THUMBS UP!!! :DDD
                              
                              ~Lara