A short story.
Pretty cool. I found it one day and it just stuck to me ever since. awesome :)
you wrote an interesting story. I voted because I loved it. I see a writing career in your future. if you're wanting to become a writer, you are doing great right. I hope you write some other stories soon. ^-^
revenge. lets drown the messenger. sweet. poor dad lets remember him. sad. the dad died. nice story
I love this story it pulls on my heartstrings! i'm so proud of you! :)