A short story.
Sorry if it took me so long to read your short story..haha just got tied up from so many requests in my discussion board...
                                    
                                    well, about the story...
                                    This is a good one...no, a VERY good one..
                                    
                                    I like how you started it and how you remember your dad then until the time of the phone call...
                                    
                                    Very well written... sweet and depressing at the same time,..
                                    
                                    Sweet because if the way the memories of your dad...
                                    Depressing because he was already gone..
                                    
                                    If it were me, i would also feel the same about phones...
                                    
                                    You get a flair for this... Absolutely brilliant!
Sorry if it took me so long to read your short story..haha just got tied up from so many requests in my discussion board...
                                    
                                    well, about the story...
                                    This is a good one...no, a VERY good one..
                                    
                                    I like how you started it and how you remember your dad then until the time of the phone call...
                                    
                                    Very well written... sweet and depressing at the same time,..
                                    
                                    Sweet because if the way the memories of your dad...
                                    Depressing because he was already gone..
                                    
                                    If it were me, i would also feel the same about phones...
                                    
                                    You get a flair for this... Absolutely brilliant!
Sorry if it took me so long to read your short story..haha just got tied up from so many requests in my discussion board...
                                    
                                    well, about the story...
                                    This is a good one...no, a VERY good one..
                                    
                                    I like how you started it and how you remember your dad then until the time of the phone call...
                                    
                                    Very well written... sweet and depressing at the same time,..
                                    
                                    Sweet because if the way the memories of your dad...
                                    Depressing because he was already gone..
                                    
                                    If it were me, i would also feel the same about phones...
                                    
                                    You get a flair for this... Absolutely brilliant!
Sorry if it took me so long to read your short story..haha just got tied up from so many requests in my discussion board...
                                    
                                    well, about the story...
                                    This is a good one...no, a VERY good one..
                                    
                                    I like how you started it and how you remember your dad then until the time of the phone call...
                                    
                                    Very well written... sweet and depressing at the same time,..
                                    
                                    Sweet because if the way the memories of your dad...
                                    Depressing because he was already gone..
                                    
                                    If it were me, i would also feel the same about phones...
                                    
                                    You get a flair for this... Absolutely brilliant!
Sorry if it took me so long to read your short story..haha just got tied up from so many requests in my discussion board...
                                    
                                    well, about the story...
                                    This is a good one...no, a VERY good one..
                                    
                                    I like how you started it and how you remember your dad then until the time of the phone call...
                                    
                                    Very well written... sweet and depressing at the same time,..
                                    
                                    Sweet because if the way the memories of your dad...
                                    Depressing because he was already gone..
                                    
                                    If it were me, i would also feel the same about phones...
                                    
                                    You get a flair for this... Absolutely brilliant!