UNMASK ME {completed}

UNMASK ME {completed}

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emilytaylor By _anothermisfit_ Updated Jul 14, 2016

Aleria was born to be a hero - born to make history. But one mistake leads her to play for the wrong team. Does she still have a chance to be a hero? Or will she continue to hate everything about her family's legacy and make good on her promise: to bring every hero to their knees.
 (underwork)

nina_teretsus nina_teretsus Jul 17, 2016
that last line though. So much telling tsk tsk; but perhaps it's bc I'm not use to you writing combat like this
geek342 geek342 Jan 17, 2016
Are they even allowed to tear student's work in half? Not sure how I'd react to that...
                              
                              Australia! And it's a well written book too! Score!
- - Jul 13, 2014
Haha okay maybe the breaks r just not showing up on mu phone then 
- - Jul 13, 2014
Oh okay thxs sort of getting it though one thing could u maybe identify when u shift scenes in a chapter? ? it creates more confusion when u don't realize use gone from one place to another other then that  the book so far
sabrina_avenue sabrina_avenue Feb 22, 2014
Yes! Finally a good book based in Australia, I think I've already commented this but another comment can't hurt right? :)
mrnumbers mrnumbers Jul 11, 2012
Wow.  You're a fantastic writer!  I'm really enjoying this story so far.