The Prophecy.

The Prophecy.

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Ember Bentley By EmberBentley Completed

When the moon goddess created the werewolves species, she thought about her heir. Who would be strong enough? Who would be brave enough? But mostly, who has the heart? 
  
  The moon goddess created a prophecy. A prophecy that will repeat itself every time a new heir is needed. 
  
  The moon looks for a girl who doesn't have a too good of a life, and will end with a world that will miss her dearly.
  
  Each girl will have to deal with rejection, but who says this girl has one mate?
  
  This heir has to encounter danger, she has to know how to use trust, honesty, and secrecy. 
  
  She will be the most powerful amongst the species. But who will be the next to claim the title?
  
  Will she have the heart and soul to do this? Or will she hide out of fear? 
  
  Will she survive her rejection? Or will she hide in a corner and cry?
  
  You'll find out in "The prophecy."
  
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I don't think I've ever read anything completely like this. Wow, terrifying start...I think that's a good thing, your hook elicited a very emotional response
mooneynn mooneynn Jul 20, 2015
I love it in my opinion it is cool. I am writing a story like this except it is a lot different
SibylDeath SibylDeath Jun 14, 2015
Another tip: Capitalize the beginnings of sentences when they're speaking! Also, I suggest making a new paragraph when Elementia talks.
SibylDeath SibylDeath Jun 14, 2015
If you want to show sarcasm, add quotes around a word. (i.e., my "amazing" brother, Kyle)