Captured

Captured

9.7K Reads 431 Votes 11 Part Story
seanfactor1 By seanfactor1 Updated Aug 26, 2015

Ralnir is a xenomorph who's queen was killed, however instead of dying like the rest of his hive he was captured by humans and used as a test subject for dozens of experiments. Read to find out how he escapes and revel in the bloodbath that ensues as he protects the only one who cares for him

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Hmm.. interesting.. very interesting indeed.. I guess without the Queen to make em hostile, Xenomorphs are not always deadly towards other Species. Great start to the story.
seraphic313 seraphic313 Aug 02, 2015
I am very proud of you for your writing.   I'm proud to call you my son.  Keep writing!  ❤️
VictoryCandyStudios VictoryCandyStudios Apr 21, 2015
I think this is awesome! My question is he faking it? Or is he a thallus being nice to her? Either way place update! :)
krocythiamichaelis krocythiamichaelis Apr 17, 2015
You did awesome I love this story I think it's the first of it's kind I have ever seen cause everyone does the predators/yautja and the poor Xeno's don't get any love please update soon 
Night-tale24 Night-tale24 Apr 15, 2015
You should continue this! This is a good story (though it is the first chapter) you did really well too. I hope too read more.