Title says it all~
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please put more detail in this story and also it's pretty interesting so i'll keep on reading and yes i'm a girl who love this stuff
Oh hell no! I'll take my chance in the woods so good bye and I hope u have a horrible life *jumps out of cars window and takes of running while flipping him off*
Should've put more detail then just a random man picking her up at her house that is still burning and telling her he's taking her to an orphanage, good story so far though, so I'll keep reading😊
This part is good. Some authors say "I" instead of "you", which is wrong, but this is good =)
Normally, people use (Y/N) instead of (F/N).
I'm sorry, I'm not trying to critique your work, so far it seems like a nice story. But I just thought I'd let you know.
I don't really know what your personal preferences are, so you can write whatever you want. I'm just trying to help you.
I feel like I'm reading a spin off of series of unfortunate events