Tri-Hybrids: The family tradition Edited

Tri-Hybrids: The family tradition Edited

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flatfoot860 By flatfoot860 Updated May 02

Westchester County in New York is home to more than just wealthy people. It is the home of the Chairman of the Chimaeran. The organization that  oversees the races of Werewolves, Vampires, Witches and any hybrid of these three races. But in the two thousand years of the Chimaeran's existence never has it faced the challenge of the ruling family, the Crassus family. Now with a new member of the family in tow. Ignatius Crassus must teach the Eric, his grandson everything he needs to know to survive having three races. Dragon, Vampire and Witch inhabiting his body. But as the boy grows problems emerge, old threats and even older enemies resurface to take advantage of the son of the Chimaeran's top Soliders. Ignatius's son, and Eric's father Julian Crassus's new and sole weakness. But can a seven year old in a few years time withstand, alone in the family castle the horror, agony and grueling training that the tri-hybrids are forced to endure as anomalies in the world.

LadyDeath98 LadyDeath98 Jul 31
The beginning is kind of questionable because this part right here doesn't explain much nor make sense.
blargian24 blargian24 Nov 26
"Because you know I am familiar with many things as you are aware" that was redundant. I know it's not my place to say but you need to work on capitalization and splitting up paragraphs and sentences. Just trying to be helpful.
I dont want to sound mean or anything but i encourage u try (u dont have to if u dont want to) telling the readers/fans whose POV it is and when u switch over to another bcuz not everyone wil notice that u changed the views.