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The Guardians

The Guardians

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Samantha By Gohardorgohome Updated Aug 12, 2010

Back when people were seperated by rank, when they trace their bloodlines, the highest ranked were those decended from angles. And, the most powerful demons. As you know, loving someone I a lower rank than you was forbidden, but some ran away to be togeather and so on. When a demon and an angle had a child, the child is titled as a Guardian. (Guardian angles?) and they have an option of a job. Save the lives that are dying but meant to be continued, and take the souls of te ones whose lives are meant to end.
Brad Rider saved Dakota's life the first time. That was meant to happen. They fell in love, but she got cancer. The doctors are going to remove her oxygen supply the next morning to end it, but brad can cure her. But Guardian angels only save those meant to be saved, but their laws force them to let the ones meant to leave, leave. Those lives are NOT meant to be saved or continued. Breaking the law won't always end up saving the life. Brad wants to save her, but the other angles would have a duty to find them and take her soul, because she should be dead.

blackflame blackflame Sep 05, 2010
Nice:) Great idea, if i may say so myself...this is what dreams can do!
Gohardorgohome Gohardorgohome Aug 13, 2010
Okay, thanks for letting me know! I'll try and work on that as much as I can:) thanks for the support and taking the time to read it!!:p
Gohardorgohome Gohardorgohome Aug 13, 2010
Ohh, yeah. Haha whenever I've loaded it onto our home computer it shows that. Thanks for the reminder and readig it! Thanks for the support:)
Beachsider_resider Beachsider_resider Aug 13, 2010
I really like it. Its original and interesting, KEEP IT UP!
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Gohardorgohome Gohardorgohome Aug 13, 2010
Thanks! Haha, that's okay. I hope you have time to read the rest sometime!