Angles Pet

Angles Pet

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PinkCamo1031 By PinkCamo1031 Updated Jun 13, 2015

In the year 7074 supernatural beings take over the world. Humans are considered pets. They are Breed  like dogs and treated like dogs. They are breed by the government who allows it to happen and at a very young age the children of humans are put in the pet academy. The pet academy are a strict school to "train" the humans so they act like animals

Warble_Art Warble_Art Jul 28
I think its a good reel, and look forward to seeing the rest, but I agree that the lines need to be smoother. But it won't stop me from reading it,😉😉😍😍
FANikki FANikki Mar 13
Good start overall, maybe just double check the grammar and punctuation?
JohnCenaWhy JohnCenaWhy Mar 19
ANGELS. A-N-G-E-L-S..
                              NOT ANGLES
                              
                              
                              I HAAATE MATH  >:(
                              
                              (this is just a joke)
kunashemanyusa kunashemanyusa Dec 10, 2016
Woooo double the fun fun funniest times even though it is scary
devancastillo devancastillo Aug 14, 2016
I don't care much about grammar but the fact your title's main word is spelled incorrectly isn't great. Interesting premise but it is angel not angle
Queenxbree Queenxbree May 16, 2016
It's a good idea for a book, but the grammar... It's just very, very bad. There are spelling mistakes, there needs to be punctuation and there are just a lot of grammatical errors.