I'm Not Who You Think

I'm Not Who You Think

57.1K Reads 2.2K Votes 18 Part Story
alauna. By xhopelovex Completed

Behind every person, there's an untold story. Stevie is just your average girl--or so she makes it seem. Everyday she acts like everything is alright, but behind closed doors she battles with anorexia nervosa and self harm. Her best friend has never even noticed. One day, this boy Jake moves to town. Stevie notices small things about him. As they grow closer, the question remains: can they save each other before its too late?

dallyssa22 dallyssa22 Jan 27, 2015
I like the different writing styles this is a good story so far I just started
thenightcourt thenightcourt Apr 12, 2014
Wow, this is really good! I love the different writing style
xhopelovex xhopelovex Jul 07, 2013
@Caramelchickens it's not a poem, but verse form. They're supposed to be like that. Thanks though:)
Caramelchickens Caramelchickens Jul 05, 2013
Hey. I finally got to reading the story and I think it's great so far. I have one question though. It's it supposed to be like a poem? And if it is, some of the lines look cut off and choppy. Overall it's great though.
Harps14 Harps14 Jun 19, 2013
Wow, this has good emotion and it's a different form of writing which is refreshing, keep it up !
DianaPS DianaPS Jun 18, 2013
I've read poetry, and this sounds pretty well. Is impressive who you make the sentences rhyme and don't lose the narration along the way. Is not slow neither dull. I really did like it. >.<