follow my dark vampiric romance as it develops in a tale of action love and adventure.
If u don't rite more I will probaly hurt u jkjk but seriously continue
Yes you should write more! This has serious potential. I noticed a few small errors, but nothing to do with the story. I suggest posting the next chapter...ten minutes ago lol Let me know what you plan on doing with this, if anything.
awwww. I loved it! The Sweet innocent angel part is exactly the view i was trying to go for in one of my stories too! Keep writing xD
@peevelmouse thank u veryuch. I appreciate the feedback. I guess it's kinda wierd that I'm a guy whose writing a vampire book with romance in it but that's the way I am. But I'm not gay. I'm just different.
:-) you have skills dude. I guess you just won your self a fan :-)
P.s could you please check out my story 'Last Breathe.' ? Thanks x
@howisall-_- thanx.....um.... Thanx. I appreciate it. I will. I seriouslly need feed back because my dream job is to be a writer.