Glass Slippers *Revised Version of 1st Draft*

Glass Slippers *Revised Version of 1st Draft*

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Sarah Penney By Pennywithaney Updated a day ago

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All Clara ever wanted was for her siblings to be happy, but with her stepmother constantly creating work, demanding attention, and ruining their lives, she knows this may never happen.

However, when her younger brother becomes gravely ill, there is little hope for his recovery if he continues to go without medicine or a doctor- both too expensive for Clara to ever hope to pay for or to beg her step-mother for. Trying to come up with a solution, Clara realizes that the only way to get the money they need to pay for a physician is if she marries a wealthy man, and does it soon.

Luckily, news of the Prince's Birthday Celebrations soon comes to town, and Clara, with the help of her siblings and a little magic, decides to go. There is only one problem; she can never reveal who she truly is, but luckily for her, one person doesn't seem to need her to.

She doesn't know who he is, what his motives are, or if he'll help her-- but she knows he is her only chance at saving her brother's life. . . even if it means being committed to a loveless marriage.

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This is the revised version of the rough draft featured by Once Upon A Time in September of 2015. While it has been edited, it's still a rough draft of sorts.

I am sobbing right now😭😭 it is so sad the beginning but I always cry in Cinderella and sad books and movies😶
Dragon_Writer993 Dragon_Writer993 18 hours ago
I have one and I say that having three siblings would kill me
Pennywithaney Pennywithaney a day ago
COMMENTS ON THE REVISED GLASS SLIPPERS AS OF DECEMBER TENTH, 2016 ARE ALL ABOVE THIS LINE. ANY AND ALL COMMENTS BELOW THIS LINE OR MADE BEFORE THIS COMMENT ARE FROM THE FIRST DRAFT.
Naatorshie Naatorshie Feb 13
Probably she will but might loose the greater part of herself doing that. I won't Be that easy
Hey, girly! I decided it was time for me to read one of your amazing works
katykat61 katykat61 a day ago
I'm excited to see what you've done in this new version! I'm just starting it now and I can't wait to see how it goes.