Crumbling Time

Crumbling Time

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angelsxdemons33 By angelsxdemons33 Completed

Lexie Howe has the ability to freeze time. She doesn't know why or how but could care less, given her potential to prevent awkward situations with less than a blink. The only downside is the loneliness attached to keeping her secret. When she finds out that the most pined-for boy in school, Cam Lawson, can also manipulate time, Lexie believes she can finally fit in. However, when they get in the way of a scientist, and Lexie becomes contaminated by experimental waste, her power goes out of control. She and Cam are pressed for time to fix the problem before she goes crazy.

Ellisz Ellisz May 25, 2012
I think the story's great so far :)) Grammar is good (bad grammar is quite a turn-off T_T) and I really like how you built the characters. Also, the way you wrote the flashback was really subtle, I liked that too ^^ (I keep saying 'like' lol. I really like it though ;D)
KDGfan KDGfan Dec 27, 2011
Awesome, but will there be a sequel?!?!?? The cliffhanger at the end is totally killing me!