All In One (not in editing mode)

All In One (not in editing mode)

14.4K Reads 313 Votes 10 Part Story
_YouuThoughtt By _pinkaddiction Updated Jul 18

Details coming later but for now read to find out what this book is about.

(prologue is being redone and other chapters are being edited)

so after your parents die you don't get sad and then you just laugh and watch T.V okay
Yallselfs? That's a new word and I'm going to use it😂😂
I'm sorry I don't mean to be picky but are. Are you okay not is you okay.
Wow what a nice way to tell your sister that your parents died. Instead of, "they got in a bad car accident and didn't make it" it's just, "well they dead" lol
BEB273 BEB273 Jan 27
This is not a hate comment but... why aren't the boys sad at all? I mean they're shocked but not sad. That is definitely not how people would react
Can you try not to use so much slang it takes away from the story