The Unexpected

The Unexpected

61.7K Reads 2.9K Votes 39 Part Story
Elizabeth M. By strictly_anonymous Completed

Peyton Grimes doesn't have a good  relationship with her father. When she was 5 years old he left her mother for some young and flashy flight attendant that he met on one of his business trips. She has not seen him since. Now, 12 years later, her mom has died. She has nowhere else to go, except to stay with her scumbag of a father and his new wife  in Florida.  Things happen in Florida that Peyton never would have expected....she begins helping her father on his ranch, making new friends, and refusing to fall in love.


[This was my FIRST story to ever write and complete. It's not perfect, but it's mine.]

  • barn
  • boots
  • bullriding
  • cowboys
  • cowgirls
  • drama
  • fiction
  • gabriella
  • gates
  • grimes
  • highschoool
  • horses
  • joseph
  • lossofmother
  • lucas
  • peyton
  • ranch
  • rodeos
  • romance
  • wattys2018
  • younglove
Goddess569 Goddess569 Jun 05, 2017
Me To Friend And I Live In Florida. What Part Of Florida Dpes This Story Take Place In?
mommapunkin mommapunkin Apr 08, 2017
What did the old fart thinking? That she say? Did he think she was going to stand there and say "oh daddy dearest were finely together after my momma died of a heartattack, and I'm so happy to be with you at last after 12yrs apart!".....
                              NO WAY IN HELL THAT WOULD HAPPEN!!!
vaccbi09 vaccbi09 Jun 30, 2016
I have a 17 yr old Grandaughter. She has lost her mom and her dad hasn't been a dad to her.  Let's see where this goes.
Teakay49 Teakay49 Feb 28, 2016
Can't wait to see what happens next.   I'm really loving this story.
KarenRead KarenRead May 13, 2015
first chapter hooked me. happens rarely.
                              great job! very realistic.