Deepest Despair

Deepest Despair

3.2K Reads 88 Votes 14 Part Story
Joe Hernandez By smileforme101 Updated Jan 24, 2011

For everything cannot be handed upon a silver platter, Ava will struggle. She shall encounter dreams that are a little more than just an average dream. she shall meet people who are completely off their rockers. But mostly she will run. run as far away from hell as she can, and she will learn the truth could be any ones deppest despair.

uniqueone95 uniqueone95 Mar 12, 2011
i love poetry, I just can't write it, like at all... yours was really good :)
IEatedYou IEatedYou Mar 08, 2011
@questionchick14 
                              I'm seriously not.
                              
                              That's why I haven't posted any...
                              
                              Hmm... Maybe I should. Just one though. Maybe everyone will tell me how bad I am, but I could get some feedback as how to improve...
                              
                              Would you be interested to give me some feedback?? x
smileforme101 smileforme101 Jan 14, 2011
@scarletdancer27 thank you! I'm glad you like it. I would love to check out your story(:
IngloriousPerfection IngloriousPerfection Jan 13, 2011
Haha it's really good :)
                              a little scary but hey, scary is good :)
                              keep writing! x
JarOfHearts96 JarOfHearts96 Jan 11, 2011
Wow, that definately got me thinking.
                              It's also different from most beginning chapters--I like different. (:
smileforme101 smileforme101 Aug 21, 2010
yeah it's not funny at all, and chyeah i'm editing it tonight.