Spin the bottle

Spin the bottle

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Jennxpennfan1 By Jennxpennfan1 Updated Mar 24, 2015

Carmen has always had feelings for her best friend, which he has no idea but what happens they play spin the bottle?

    13PugLover 13PugLover Feb 25, 2016
    Why was it so short it should have 1000 words per chapter no one replied because it was so short and so they don't have a full opinion on it this is some friendly advise take it or leave it
    JMFelic JMFelic Mar 12, 2015
    Good start, but you should make the chapters longer if you can to catch some more readers. :) keep it up.