A teacher stalks a student. The student thinks he just weird. What happens when he takes it a step further and kidnaps her. How far will he go to keep her? How will she escape? What will happen with everyone involved?
Um it's just my personal preference but writing in past tense is much easier and flows better when telling a story. Try it out, you might learn to love it too. Or not that's totally fine.
Between out and "I'm you might want to think about adding a "an"
After " by Terror" put a comma. Then right before you say," yes I love..." you might want to put something like: and I snuggle back saying," yes I love..."
Should be: Jacob, an awesome cashier at Circle K who graduated last year, questioned.
I'm not trying to be rude. I'm just doing what you asked by telling you about grammar mistakes. There needs to be a coma between " pants" and " gotta"
Add is between "he" and "4" also you might want to change "4" to "four". Normally numbers less than fifteen should be spelt out.