50 Shades of Grey fanfic

50 Shades of Grey fanfic

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Kaylee By imapackerlover Updated Nov 06

So this is my fanfic it still has the same characters but I added me in it so I hope you like it.

I really like it. You put Different perspectives  into the book . That's really nice.
                              But i agree with @jayayay_x
jayayay_x jayayay_x Aug 08, 2015
You wrote it in a shitty way... Sometimes idek whos speaking its hard to follow without speech marks, for me.
ijustdontknow6 ijustdontknow6 Jul 04, 2015
PUT " in because it's so confusing and you're going from one subject to another and it's annoying