Kechin a new species

Kechin a new species

4 Part Story 1.9K Reads 27 Votes
Savannah Aulson By 336apple8 Updated Jan 10, 2011

Kechin is a creature that has 10 senses. 5 human senses and 5 new ones. The new ones are: 1. ice. 2. fire 3. invisibility. 4. mind reading. 5. flight. If a Kechin freezes someone they turn into a black cloak. If they burn someone they become a red cloak also known as a red trainer. 
One day a young boy named Tom finds out that he is a kechin, that has survived to be 14. See the black cloaks kill Kechins because they become to powerful like: adolf hitler. 
A red trainer meets Tom and tells him whats going on in his point of view and asks Tom if he can train him to defeat all of the black cloaks. But will he? How will things turn out? FIND OUT NOW!

336apple8 336apple8 Apr 29, 2012 12:50AM
@xxxyoloxxX22 Sorry I haven't been on in forever. I am planning on editing all of my stories again before posting more. I'll check yours out.
336apple8 336apple8 Jan 22, 2011 10:37PM
@LadyOfTheNight @HannahCaudill  Thanks. And I will go over it...
XxxoKaylaXxxo XxxoKaylaXxxo Jan 21, 2011 01:40AM
I Love the story so far! Awesome job I can't wait to keep reading!!. :p Will you please check out my stories Nightmares ~ The Angel Night Story and Remember December? Thank you!
336apple8 336apple8 Aug 10, 2010 07:02PM
@Dannny @devvvybumzz @amandaPLEASE190   hey guys I uploaded the 2nd part. It's way better than the first let me know what you think.
_DevonaBFMV _DevonaBFMV Aug 10, 2010 04:55PM
haha okay. i will check it out!  you really write well for a 12 year old. i am 13 i cnt even write dat gud! wow and you will make a great author
336apple8 336apple8 Aug 10, 2010 04:09PM
@devvvybumzz  @amandaPLEASE190  yes it is true I am only 12. I will be 13 this november 2nd and my dream job is to be an author. Be sure to check out my other stories and thanks for the votes!