The New Girl At West Haven Academy

The New Girl At West Haven Academy

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Marks By Markss Updated Oct 03, 2011

(watty awards) When lisbeth arrives at the new prestigious school her cousin goes to she automatically fits in.  But when her heart starts feeling things it shouldn't is when everything takes a turn for the worst. Her heart being torn in two. Knowing which one she should choose. But her feelings are also strong for the other. Deaths, secrets, lies, and pain wreck her life. How can she continue when everything falls apart. Her life slowly seems to crumble  unless someone can help her.

Calynn131 Calynn131 Jul 03, 2013
I have a suggestion 
                              If you put less space between each paragraph, it would be easier to read.
MeganRainHolmes MeganRainHolmes Jul 29, 2011
I agree with everyone that it could use a few more details, but you've already got so much drama waiting to happen: a new school, a new house, a brother with cancer. Great start!
realityxfantasy realityxfantasy Jul 29, 2011
Few grammar errors that I'm pretty sure you'll fix. It's yet another werewolf story, no offense, but I'm really getting tired of reading these. You're a very good writer though and it's interesting, being the new girl ;)
sassysmartgurl93 sassysmartgurl93 Jul 29, 2011
okay so it didnt suck...dont put yourself down like that lol <3 anyway its good so far....=] <3
Markss Markss Jul 10, 2011
@VFC1DLove thanks! ill edit it towards the end of the chapter. :D
Markss Markss Jul 09, 2011
@doggieluverrr thanks so much! im glad you do(:
                               @hbrooks thank you, it means a lot that you like it :D