Sorceress

Sorceress

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Nebula07 By Nebula07 Updated Sep 25

They came at night, angry and lustful for treasure and slaves. We stood no chance. I lay in bed, completely oblivious. Then I heard the screaming.

Aine O'Connell has been captured by Vikings, and forced into slavery. Then one day everything changes.

Avidya Avidya Feb 01
I'd like to point out, "vikings" is a term that means "raiders". There was no such thing as "viking women" or "viking children". I'm pointing this out because you wrote "two men vikings". There were only male vikings.
Mister_Macabre Mister_Macabre Aug 28, 2015
Nice writing.  The chapter was quite short but well done anyhow. Cant wait to read more.
monique_1_718 monique_1_718 Aug 22, 2015
it's so good and I wasn't expecting excitement this early on
maymo76 maymo76 Jun 16, 2015
Love how you've gotten straight into the action - this is something that I should do with my writing. Love it!
GravyNCheese GravyNCheese May 15, 2015
the Norse meaning of hel is actually to die. "to go to hell" means to die.