They came at night, angry and lustful for treasure and slaves. We stood no chance. I lay in bed, completely oblivious. Then I heard the screaming.
Aine O'Connell has been captured by Vikings, and forced into slavery. Then one day everything changes.
I'd like to point out, "vikings" is a term that means "raiders". There was no such thing as "viking women" or "viking children". I'm pointing this out because you wrote "two men vikings". There were only male vikings.
Nice writing. The chapter was quite short but well done anyhow. Cant wait to read more.
it's so good and I wasn't expecting excitement this early on
Love how you've gotten straight into the action - this is something that I should do with my writing. Love it!
the Norse meaning of hel is actually to die. "to go to hell" means to die.