Aren't Vampires Supposed to Be Scary?

Aren't Vampires Supposed to Be Scary?

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Erika By ErikaLugo Updated Dec 03, 2011

Lily was the school whore. She was the outcast, the freak of the class, the rebel the teachers hated, and the worst daughter. After a huge fight with her jerk of a boyfriend, he leaves her on the side of the road by an abandoned forest. Then she meets James, a sexy, cruel vampire; and oh boy was he scary, cruel, and hungry. But was he frightening enough to change Lily's ways...and cause her to fall in love with him?

bbyjay31 bbyjay31 Jun 14, 2014
lol that dumb white girl moment umm no offense to any one Caucasian
RKStewarttson26 RKStewarttson26 Aug 06, 2012
I like it so far, but, not to be rude, some of the wording is confusing. The sentences has some odd placements of words that don't fit well together. All in all, the story is ah-mazing and I am voting and reading on.
ionlycomeoutatnight ionlycomeoutatnight Jul 11, 2012
I found a vampire in my bathtub? interesting, lol. im interested so far in this current story!
sceline sceline Apr 01, 2011
oh my god that was AMAZING  !!! i was lyk what's gonna happen the whole time !! love it 
aliyaRawrsYou aliyaRawrsYou Sep 09, 2010
they guy is a dickhead! But the story is really good. I'm loving it so far! The intro makes you think like "shit, whats gonna happen" and then she meets Mr Mysterious. Plus the grammar is good, thank god!Ahah I talk alot don't I. 
                              ~aliya~
angelheaven101 angelheaven101 Sep 03, 2010
I love this story! Um...I hate when people leave me simple comments on my stories so I liked the part when she told her mom she loved her. Her mom was probably like um....ok babe ILY 2. Are you pregnant? LOL!