Eaten Alive ✓ [Completed]

Eaten Alive ✓ [Completed]

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Alfie Meader By AlfieMeader Completed

Highest Rank In Horror - #7 

The horrific zombie apocalypse breaks out! Alfie finds himself with two people that he has only just met as the world begins to slowly end. No body knows the truth of how anything has happened and Alfie is determined to find out. Will he be able to? 

Read as we follow Alfie become a fighter, a leader of a group and survive the apocalypse.

Who will survive and who will get eaten alive?

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- - Mar 11
I don’t think you need this in here, or keep this and use a semicolon after “bright green eyes”. Right now it’s a run on
- - Mar 11
Really long run on. Use commas, semicolons, and periods to prevent these. They make the reader bored easily.
Ok seriously how old is this kid, even i would pay attention if the tv says evacuate. Come on.
That’s awfully convenient for the rest of the story isn’t it
For once they meh news doesn't say, stay in your houses, a nice change but a great way to start some chaos in the streets
Change the rebep bit to them wanting to cut things up in the garden, it makes it more of a childish and realistic thing teenagers do.