LOVE CAUSE YOUR DESERVE.
FIGHT CAUSE YOU NEED IT.
FALL CAUSE IT WAS ENOUGH.
when you think that money is everything you need. how about you try a dress? and a glass slipper and see where they take you.
I love the cover and the beginning is good so far, I'm intrigued about the sudden boy. Hope this will all end well, based on the cover something WILL happen. Can't wait to see what it is
It says "me like"
I think she wanted to say" me amor" my lover
Something ain't right here.😒 Can anyone else sense this guy is secretly a bastard that is hiding something.
your cover is amazing it's really pretty and same goes for your banner :)
I think it was a god start to the story. If I were you, I'd focus more on developing the details in the chapter. What she she's, hears, feels etc.
I also love the names you've used.
Its good considering its your first story...
just watch out of mistakes here and there. Use punctuations where required and the story will do much better! :)
keep it up!