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Green Success (version 2)

Green Success (version 2)

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Andrew By AndrewT Updated Jan 14, 2011

In a town where you're considered rich just for having a watch... Where you'd be worshiped for having a TV... Two towns separated by violence and money... Both lacking one thing... Green... A place where an arm would be broken for a dollar... A place suffering of starvation... a place littered with trash... A town made of cardboard and a town made of wood... A town full of orphans and a town full of guilt... A place no one wants to live... But a place they will always call home... And a family they will always return to by the end of the day... The Green Success...

chairsniffa chairsniffa Oct 25, 2010
Hehehe its the shakespeare reading dakota fanning lyrics ain't it;)
AndrewT AndrewT Aug 26, 2010
@chockslam haha thank you! I was trying to make it a quick read, so I ended up taking a lot of the unnecessary details out.... 
chockslam chockslam Aug 14, 2010
it's really awesome dude!!! i luv how u did it that it doesn't need a lot of details to please others...loving Long's attitude btw!!!!!!!!!
brycec brycec Aug 10, 2010
@AndrewT You're welcome.  As I think I told you before, I'm an avid reader, so I can pick out a few things.  Also, even in my early college days I had to do proofreading.  Besides, the more eyes reading your work before publication, the better it will be, when released.  Alright, thanks.
AndrewT AndrewT Aug 10, 2010
@brycec lol thanks! Even when I read the quotation I was like, "What's wrong with this?" it took me a couple reads before I realized it was missing a "to" lol, man, what would I do without you? ...I'll remember to put your name in the special thanks! 
Happy_24_7 Happy_24_7 Aug 10, 2010
                              really awesome!!!!!!!!!
                              keep it up 
                              buda bum bum bummmmm
                              i’m lovin’ it!