Destined (Original)

Destined (Original)

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Alexis M. Askew By AlexisMAskew Completed

(Book One of the Elemental Series)Bella has only known a terrible life living with her Aunt and Uncle. She longs for an escape and to discover the truth about what happened to her parents. Her dream comes true when she is accepted to a school that will give her everything she's ever wanted, friends, a life, answers, and adventure.
    Elementum Academy is a school for those gifted with the power of controlling all the elements until they specialize in one. Bella learns more of her parents death, and discover that their death was part of a much bigger and scarier plan. At first, Bella worries whether she will specialize, along with her other friends, until students start to get attacked by someone on the inside. Now they have to discover who they are, before they are next. But what they don't realize is that by discovering the truth, they could set off a chain reaction...that could mean the death of them all.
    
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    Cover by @Appletwig
    (Currently being rewritten)
  Highest rank- #155 in Fantasy (6/22/17)

  • action
  • adventure
  • elements
  • magic
  • mystery
  • romance
  • war
SShe's most likely a harry potter fan
                              AND i love it
                              I CANT WAIT TO READ IT
                              AND MY NAME IS ISABELLA AND IM 15 SO ITS ALMOST LIKE IM IN THE BOOK COOL
Butterflyab Butterflyab May 06
This book is too much like Harry Potter which is a good thing and bad thing...good: cuz this is like Harry Potter and I like Harry. Bad: you need to make this plot less like Harry Potter.
bamdumb bamdumb Jan 03
I thought her parents died when she was just 6mnths old??? What do you mean by brough??
CelticTiger12 CelticTiger12 Mar 19, 2016
Your descriptions are unique and oftentimes beautiful. Be careful about editing though.  
                              
                              I feel like this hits far too close to Harry Potter in characters and plot. Cold, cruel aunt and uncle. A mysterious letter to some magic school. No offense, but it's not exactly unique.
willthecagedbirdsing willthecagedbirdsing Mar 11, 2016
This is a great start, it really reminds me of the part from harry potter where the durselys are trying to stop him from getting his letter to hogwarts :) I like Bella as a main character, I look forward to reading more!
rprimrose59 rprimrose59 Aug 10
Looking forward to where you might go with this. There are endless other trails she might take. I am not convinced that the book will be just like Harry Potter in the end.