Eyes Like The Moon (gxg Lesbian Story) (Under Editing)

Eyes Like The Moon (gxg Lesbian Story) (Under Editing)

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fiya By treesnbees Updated May 30, 2017

So it's about lesbian werewolves and stuff I guess

  • demon
  • fantasy
  • fiction
  • gxg
  • lesbian
  • shapeshifter
  • teen
  • werewolf
  • witch
ThatCrazyBlob_1 ThatCrazyBlob_1 Nov 11, 2017
How come, in so many of these werewolf stories, the main character refers to their wolf form as a separate being. I've never really understood it. I know you can't speak on behalf of everyone who does this, but I was wondering if you could let me know why you specifically are doing it.
ThatCrazyBlob_1 ThatCrazyBlob_1 Nov 11, 2017
The narrator is in wolf form, wouldn't any grin they take on be wolfish?
                              The last sentence in this paragraph is a bit of a sentence fragment.
_shadowz_ _shadowz_ Jan 02
How am I supposed to know what the story is about when it doesn’t have a blurb?
ThatCrazyBlob_1 ThatCrazyBlob_1 Nov 11, 2017
I feel like this would flow better if there was a line about how the other character speaking pulled out the narrator out of their daydream. The way this is done rn is a bit awkward, and almost feels like an a/n.
ThatCrazyBlob_1 ThatCrazyBlob_1 Nov 11, 2017
The previous paragraph already pretty much explained this, which makes this paragraph redundant.
FrankOShea FrankOShea Jul 25, 2016
Good writing, and I must say I do love the correct grammar and spelling. I'm a fan of those