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I'm a mermans mate ?!?!

I'm a mermans mate ?!?!

22.7K Reads 710 Votes 4 Part Story
rosiline2000 By rosiline2000 Updated Jul 03, 2015

As I'm walking threw the cafe an order my drink the weather Chanel
 says don't go out in the water a huge storms going to approach . I think to myself well that's never stopped me before ..... Hey you might be thinking well your stupid but I'm the all time champion surfer I have to practice twice every day to keep my title an no stupid storms gonna stop me besides I was just out there what's the worst that could go wrong ? ( Looking for an editor to help with the grammar an reminding me to update message me if your interested thanks ) Not updating till I find an editor

  • acident
  • mate
  • mermaid
  • romance
  • storm
- - Jun 10, 2017
Yeah, don't get mad though: I like what you have so far, but plz slow down
I’m can u like put quotes so that we know when a person talks cuz it gets kinda confusing
Well author-chan the story is interesting but there are 3 things that are wrong with it the first thing is you don't really know when somebody's talking
Romanoph Romanoph Aug 16, 2016
I couldn't  understand a word because there are no punctuation
Daymare_Lele Daymare_Lele Feb 25, 2016
It was great good job and everyone else is right too👏👍
Taehyungie_Wolf Taehyungie_Wolf Oct 23, 2016
Can you use "parentheses" when the people are talking it's very confusing