the same (jeff the killer love story)

the same (jeff the killer love story)

15.3K Reads 463 Votes 11 Part Story
Pandora Reavis By PandoraReavis Completed

a girl named luna who has powers and  snow white skin  was made fun of all her life and now she meets a crazy killer?

  • creepypasta
  • death
  • insanity
  • jeffthekill
  • murder
Lack of punctuation is infuriating, grammar looks like a 5th graders, they're are a small amount of spelling errors and the oc is stereotypical and insulting.
Is it fate I'm oddly am drinking a monster wal reading this?
Hooooe Hooooe 5 days ago
I would like to suggest proofreading or having someone proofread this because the grammar is absolutely terrible.
Campos1976 Campos1976 Jul 07, 2016
WOW!!!!! Your story is awesome!!!!!!!!😝😝😝 BUT CONFUSING😬 because I don't see any P.O.V changes and .......ITS CONFUSING.NO OFFENSE!!!!! I Still like ur story !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Purdysaurus_Rex Purdysaurus_Rex Apr 27, 2016
No offense because this is a good story, but there is literally 0% grammar in this. Especially the P.O.V changes. And speech? Why no speech marks? (Sorry I'm on the grammar police and can't help it, no offense intended)
falconluver falconluver Dec 12, 2016
grammar's good use of punctuation is really really bad. I think u just use periods. Dude plz fix dis. The plot is nice and good but the punctuation is real bad. I wanna help but I think I cant coz I have many projects to do. But I still wanna help you write this