the same (jeff the killer love story)

the same (jeff the killer love story)

18.5K Reads 563 Votes 11 Part Story
Pandora Reavis By PandoraReavis Completed

a girl named luna who has powers and  snow white skin  was made fun of all her life and now she meets a crazy killer?

  • creepypasta
  • death
  • insanity
  • jeffthekill
  • murder
I ♡ INSANITY AND MONSTER THEY ATE MY TOP 2 FAVORITE SONGS!!!!!!!!!!!!!
_utterly_useless_ _utterly_useless_ May 05, 2017
Lack of punctuation is infuriating, grammar looks like a 5th graders, they're are a small amount of spelling errors and the oc is stereotypical and insulting.
kate_chaser_ kate_chaser_ Jul 23, 2017
Is it fate I'm oddly am drinking a monster wal reading this?
Hooooe Hooooe Oct 15, 2017
I would like to suggest proofreading or having someone proofread this because the grammar is absolutely terrible.
Campos1976 Campos1976 Jul 07, 2016
WOW!!!!! Your story is awesome!!!!!!!!😝😝😝 BUT CONFUSING😬 because I don't see any P.O.V changes and .......ITS CONFUSING.NO OFFENSE!!!!! I Still like ur story !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Purdysaurus_Rex Purdysaurus_Rex Apr 27, 2016
No offense because this is a good story, but there is literally 0% grammar in this. Especially the P.O.V changes. And speech? Why no speech marks? (Sorry I'm on the grammar police and can't help it, no offense intended)