Turned Into A Vampire

Turned Into A Vampire

1.5K Reads 23 Votes 6 Part Story
David Harrison By WeaponX Updated Jul 17, 2012

An 18 life is about to go down in a spiral of blood gore and girls. One his birthday he goes out and gets turned. Does he know that he will be a powerful vampire or will he be more.

WeaponX WeaponX Aug 19, 2010
Oh if you read this post comments please even if it's crtizim (hate spellin the hard way which is correctly)
kjirst54 kjirst54 Aug 18, 2010
I really like it. I hope there is more. The only parts you might want to fix are spelling (which I can't talk cuz I am a horrible speller lol) and maybe separate the dialogue. Give each character their own paragraph when they r talking. It just makes it easier to read. I loved it though!