Precious

Precious

5.4K Reads 122 Votes 23 Part Story
Estella Rose By Erose115 Updated Sep 13, 2016

Once upon a time there was a beautiful little girl.
She grew up naive because she had everything anyone could ever want. One day her bubble blows up. After her best friend betrays her, she's forced to move to New York and to open her eyes to the fact that the world is a selfish place where nobody genuinely cares about anybody.
In New York, with the help of her sexy step-brother, she turns sadistically cruel and manipulative. When she finally returns home to Miami, she plans to destroy the life of her ex-best friend. But how can she do that when there's a gorgeous emerald-eyed boy distracting her and destroying all her plans?
  
  ______________________________
  Precious and fragile things
  Need special handling
  My God, what have we done to you?
  
  Things get damaged, things get broken
  I thought we'd manage, but words left unspoken
  Left us so brittle
  There was so little left to give....
  
  Precious by Depeche Mode

  • billionaires
  • fame
  • fiction
  • high
  • hot
  • humor
  • money
  • people
  • popularity
  • precious
  • queen
  • revenge
  • rumors
  • school
  • step-brother
  • teenagers
  • vengeance
  • wealthy
JoWatson_101 JoWatson_101 Nov 22, 2014
I am assuming that the use of the name (E)Stella Rose is intentional?
taylor2240 taylor2240 May 03, 2013
That was definitely a crazy beginning! Definitely an attention grabber. I really like it and am interested to see what's going to happen. There were a few grammatical errors but they don't really detract from the story.
_apathy _apathy Mar 03, 2013
I love this ..its really good. I love the hate to love story line.. going to start reading the first chapter now.. and voted :)
Erose115 Erose115 Jan 29, 2013
@Socasm lol its hard for me to write them hating each other because i love them and want them to be together forever... lol but i'll keep that in mind when editting * - as the story goes on i think u'll see why their relationship is such a love/hate thing
Theawesomejem Theawesomejem Jan 21, 2013
its very interesting and funny... :) i'll defo read more later! great beginning.
Tepid_ Tepid_ Jan 06, 2013
Pretty good I just though they were a bit... extravagent. Like the characters are sorta a bit too much. I liked your word choice and few grammar errors! Voting and going onto the next chapter.