Kitten Shifter

Kitten Shifter

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pinkdiva223 By pinkdiva223 Updated Jul 02

Jasmine Michels always had a horrible life because she couldn't shift into a wolf like the others she could only shift into a cat or so she thought. When she finally meets her mate who she has been praying for her whole life to bring her out of this hell hole she calls home it's not who she expets it to be. Will her mate accept her or reject her and will she accept him?

sisi241 sisi241 Mar 14
Ok, here's my tips: keep it in present or past tense, don't switch back and forth (keep that in mind while writing this). Also: when writing, maybe give hints on what's going to happen next, hints of her background, her past.
sisi241 sisi241 Mar 14
Ok, edit time!!! One: more details!! It's soo good, but I'm afraid it's a bit hard to form that mental image without some description. Also: describe the characters: what's her hair color, how does the alphas figure intimidate the others?? Etc etc
Mariahgalindojoan Mariahgalindojoan Jun 15, 2015
can u check out my friends story... her name is oppaloopa12